domingo, 17 de abril de 2011

THE PLACE WHERE I LIVE

1. I live in Caxias do Sul, which is a city very important the state of Rio Grande do Sul in Brazil. It’s population is about four hundred thirty five thousand four hundred eighty two people. Making it the second biggest city in the state of Rio Grande do Sul.

2. Caxias do Sul is a beautiful place, and it’s great for eat. There are lot Italian restaurants. And the city is museums and some parks. There are many reminders of the city’s rich history, with fabulous monuments.

3. The lifestyle is ideal for people who don’t suffer with the cold. In Caxias do Sul there are only two stations: the winter and the bus station. The city is very rainy.

4. Caxias do Sul is known for the greap feast. It’s a typical Italian festival that happens held every two years in the month of February. The festival is know nationally.

5. But I think the best things about Caxias are the employment opportunities, but the people are very hardworking and don’t have time for family and new friend, they’re always working.

I don’t like much Caxias do Sul.




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    1. I live in Caxias do Sul, which is a (-) very important (CITY) (ON) the state of Rio Grande do Sul in Brazil. It’s population is about four hundred thirty five thousand four hundred (AND) eighty two people. Making it the second biggest city in the state of Rio Grande do Sul.

    2. Caxias do Sul is a beautiful place, and it’s great for eat(ING). There are (A) lot (OF) Italian restaurants. And the city is (FULL OF) museums and (THERE ARE) some parks. There are many reminders of the city’s rich history, with fabulous monuments.

    3. The lifestyle is ideal for people who don’t suffer with the cold. In Caxias do Sul there are only two stations (PARA ESTAÇÃO USAMOS - SEASON! MAS ENTENDI A PIADA HAAHAH): the winter and the bus station. (HAAHAHAH) The city is very rainy.

    4. Caxias do Sul is known for the greap(E'S) feast. It’s a typical Italian festival that happens (-) every two years in the month of February. The festival is (NATIONALLY) know(N).

    5. But I think the best things about Caxias are the employment opportunities, but the people are very hardworking and don’t have time for family and new friend(S), they’re always working.

    I don’t like (-) Caxias do Sul (VERY MUCH).

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